Re: The Stuarts

[chloe3388]

Don't leave me hanging, pleease, more, more.....

great lead in....

chloe

[chloe3388]

Wow, that's all I can say..Keep it going


chloe

[Beans]

Damn you can story tell Jim ! Did the other story publish? Keep writing brother ;D
Beans

[MNMOM]

What a wonderful storyteller you are, Jim!

[chloe3388]

Really enjoying your story it is great.. When ever you publish I will be first in line to buy...

chloe

[nancy1340]

Very good story jim. Thank you so much. More soon I hope.

[chloe3388]

jim,

keep it coming, really enjoying the story

chloe

[gypho]

Keep writing, Jim! You're doing a great job, and I can't wait to read more of it!!!

gypho

[Parker]

Jim,

You are a very good writer. I enjoyed what I read so far. keep it coming!!!

[gypho]

Don't stop now!!! AAAaaaagggghhhhhh!!!!

[monkeyman]

Glad to see another story comeing together. Looking realy good so far. Weather its here or at the Monkey (am at survivalmonkey daily and it also emails me when a PM comes in but here should work also) let me know when the other story is published or even if you want a beta read on it. Would love to get a copy and will have to check back more often to keep up on this one as well. Looking great for content out of the chute on this one.

[lost1]

great story.
I'm hooked, git er done.

[MNMOM]

Jim, You are one great story teller!

[gypho]

Keep going, Jim, it's turnin' out good so far... ;D

gypho

[chloe3388]

possum patrol, now that's cool, hehe..

Great work waiting for more

chloe

[lost1]

Great story, you have me hooked.
Please keep up the good work, you are a really talented writer.

Lost1

[gypho]

AND?? ??? ??? ??? ??

Waiting for the next installment, but not very patiently ;D

gypho

[gypho]

...............................and................ ..(don't stop now, you're on a roll....)...........

gypho

[chloe3388]

great story keep it coming... I feel so much better now that I've had my reading time hehe

chloe

[gypho]

Great story, Jim! Keep'er comin'!

gypho

[monkeyman]

Looking good. Will be looking forward to readingmore.

[gypho]

Excellent, Jim. Outstanding. Keep up the good work.

gypho

[chloe3388]

I am sure glad to see the latest part of the story, been sitting here staring at the screen waiting lol...

Really great and luv the civilians being hijacked hehe...

chloe

[gypho]

Been waiting on this last installment, I feel like I'm at the old-tyme picture-show and the weekly tales they used to tell....

Can hardly wait for the next "weekly" installment. I've taken a real liking to this story. Get on with it, Jim. You're doing great!

gypho

[chloe3388]

And he scores again!!!! oops too much soccer.

jim, this is a great story, more please..

[Parker]

Very Very good.

Keep them coming.

[gypho]

Only bad thing about this Jim, is, it's never long enough.... ;)

gypho

[chloe3388]

Now I will make it thru the weekend... This is so gooood.

chloe

[chloe3388]

Thank you jim, for a great weekend read.. as always it just gets better....

chloe

[gypho]

Okay, where is it?? >:(

You've gotten several of us addicted to The Stuarts, now it's time for another installment, Jim.

Time to "fix" the addict. Namely, ME. ;)

gypho

[gypho]

Wow. I just have to say, wow. Excellent writing, Jim. As always. Keep it coming.

gypho

[chloe3388]

Thank you jim, been waiting and it's here.. That was great, real edge of the seat stuff...


chloe

[lost1]

:)Great story. You are really talented. Please keep them coming, I really enjoy the episodes.
Many Thanks,
Lost1

[Cattails]

I read the Aug. 3rd installment and it was really good. Where is the earlier story at? Is it still around? I looked around for it but couldn't find it. I wish I could read it.

[MNMOM]

Thank you, Jim, for another wonderful installment.

[gypho]

And the plot thickens....... ;)

This is a good story. Keep'er comin', Jim.

gypho

[chloe3388]

This story is getting soooo good and I can't wait for the nest installment...

chloe

[chloe3388]

Wow, that's all I can say...

more please

chloe

[gypho]

I agree. More, Please. ;D

gypho

[Rick]

THANK YOU SIR, MAY I HAVE ANOTHER !!!

;D

[chloe3388]

This is getting really intense, and I am biting my nails!!!

chloe

[lost1]

Great story. I keep checking back every day, it's worth the wait.

[MNMOM]

Jim,
I'm going to print these latest editions off so that I can sit in a comfy chair and read them rather than at the computer. I love the way you tell a story. Thanks so much.

[lost1]

WOW This is a real nail-biter...
Thanks!!!!!!!!!

[gypho]

It just keeps on gettin' better'n better...

gypho

[gypho]

Can't wait to hear what happens next...

gypho

[lost1]

Don't stop now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I''ll worry until I know more. Great stuff. Thanks

[Marissa]

Great story!!!

[Rick]

Aww right, let's get back with the program, mister. You been lolly gagging long enough. We're waiting to see how the congressional aides handle a hot LZ. Not well, we suspect.


;D ;D

[gypho]

A We're waiting to see how the congressional aides handle a hot LZ. Not well, we suspect.



Now that's puttin' it mildly... LOL!!!

gypho

[lost1]

:o :oThen what, then what, then what??????

[gypho]

AND? ? ? ? ? ?

gypho

[lost1]

Ahhh! A Rock and Roll story, let's have it!!!!!!!! ;D

[jim]

My apologies folks. I've been advised to NOT display any further parts of the story until it's been completed and copywrited. The other book hasn't received the copywrite yet either which is taking up to 6 months due to a move of the department location. So, when the whole process is completed, then I'll post more.

jim

[gypho]

Can't say that I blame you, Jim. That's a mighty fine piece of literature, IMO. Can't wait till ya finish it!

gypho

[lost1]

Aw Shucks!!!!!!!!!!!